That's pretty standard although dhige dhige can be replaced with quite a few other interesting bols. example
dhere dhere or dhene gene or dhene dhina or
gege naga .
The thing is you will have a hard time creating a new Kayda if it is only 2 lines . For an original kayda it should be at least 4 lines and even then we draw from things that are already created example
dhatir kittke dhigedhige kittke
tirekita takata- dhigedhige kttke
dhatir kittke dhigedhige kittke
dhatir kittke tuna kittke
Something with 4 lines or 8 lines will create a little more originality. But usually it's not like we say we invented a new kayda, even Zakir will say this is
my version of this type of kaida or my variation .
But this is your variation on a very old traditional kayda so keep up the good work.
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Regards,
Warren
gil (Jul 31, 2002 09:44 a.m.):
During the last time i played my tabla i think i invented new kayda:
Does anyone knows if it exists allready?